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Naradhan
Bhargavi Nilayam - A Retouch
Scene 1
"Ithrayum kaalam enikku vendi kaathirunna ente bloge ninakku nanni!" ennu paranju kondu Harry blogilekku kaaleduthu vachu.
Blog aake alagolamaay kidakkukayaayirunnu ... Andhakaara nibidamaaya blogil peruchaazhiyum ettukaaliyum koothaadunnu ....
Raathri ...
Backgroundil Saagarinte attahasavum kolaviliyum ....
Njetti virachu kondu Harry ezhunettu ....
Pettannu vathilkkal oru paricha muttu ....
"Aaraanathu ...?" Harry virachu kondu chodichu.
"Jyanaanu Asu."
Harry vaathil thurannu .... Athaa nilkkunnu Asu ....
"Ningalentha ivide?" Harry chodichu.
"Touchings kittumo ennariyaan vannatha." Asu utharameki.
"Enna thaanum ente koode koodikko. Enikkoru companikku."
Scene 2
Andhakaaram blogineyaake choozhnnu nilkkunnu.
Pettannoru nilaviliyode Asu pidajezhunelkkunnu.
"Entha? Enthu patti?" Harry chodichu.
"Jyaan ... Jyaan kandu!" Asu kithapadakkaan paadu pettu.
"Aaru Namithayeyo?" Harry udvegathodu koodi chodichu.
"Alla ... Saagarine!"
"Manassinte thonnalaanathu .... Sarasammaye vichaarichu kidakkaan nokku." Harry niraashayodu koodi paranju.
Scene 3
"Entha vendathu saare?" chaayakkadakkaran chodichappol Harry chinthakalil ninnu njetti unarnnu ...
"Oru banum randu poricha infractionum."
"Vere enthenkilum veno sir?"
"Koode kurachu offtopicum aavaam."
chaayakkadakkaran Harryude munpil vibhavangal nirathi.
"Athey," Harry paranju, "ini muthal bhakshanam ente veettilekku koduthayakkumo?"
"Athinetha sare? Sarinte blog evideyaanennu paranjaal mathi."
"Vadakkottu thirinjaal naalamathe veedaanu."
"Ennu vachaal...?"
"Forum Keralam ennaanu peru."
"Narayana, narayana!!!" chaayakkadakkaran thante vyaajane nokki. Vyaajan nisheda bhavathil thalayilakki kaanichu.
"Ayyo ..." chaayakkadakkaran kshamapanathodu koodi paranju, "Angottu offtopicu kondu varaan ivide postukal illallo..."
"Saaramilla ... Jaanivide vannu kazhicholaam." Harry utharameki. Ayaalude manassil samshayathinte vithukal naambeduthu kazhinjirunnu.
"Ithu vare ivide undaayirunna Nasrani evideppoyi?" chaayakkadakkaran pettannu chodichu.
Appolaanu Harry athu sradhikkunathu .... Enthum Parayaam thread ozhinju kidakkunnu.
Scene 4
Vaathilil thattu keetu avar njetti.
"Aaraanathu?" Sameerum Nasraaniyum chodichu.
"Ithu njaanaanu Harry."
"Ennaal akathekku poru."
Harry vaathil thurannu akathekku vannu. Pettannaanu muriyude moolakku veruthe irunnirunna Casanovayude Fan ayaalkku nere kai choondiyathu.
Harry chodya bhavathil Sameerineyum Nasraaniyeyum nokki.
"Sradhikkanda. Avan angineya .... Modsine pedippikkaan vendi iruthiyatha." Achayan paranju.
"Nee eppo vannu?" Sameer chodichu.
"Innale vaikunneram."
"Ninakku Blogu kittiyo?" Sameer Harriye nokki.
"Ningal anweshikkumbol illa. Njan anweshikkumbol undu."
"Evideya kittiyathu?" Achayan chodichu.
"Vadakkottu thirinjaal naalamathe veedaanu. Forum Keralam ennaanu peru."
Sameerum Nasraaniyum pediyode parasparam nokki.
"Avide thaamasikkan kollilla. Avide Sagarundu."
"Athokke ningalude thonnalaanu." Harry nisaara bhavathil paranju.
"Nee ini angottu pokanda. Ivide kidanno." Sameer paranju.
"Njaan ini muthal avideyaanu thamasam. Enikkavide oru companyum undu. Oru Asu."
Scene 4 (continuation)
"Jyaan ini muthal avideyaanu thamasam. Enikkavide oru companyum undu. Oru Asu."
"Asuvine viswasikkaan kollillaa," Nasrani paranju.
"Athirikkatte. Aaranee Sager?" Harry chodichu.
"FKyile omana doctor ... edakku 2 kuppi adikkum ... peru Sagar." Sameer thudiyittu.
"Veluthu Sundhran ... kurache samsarikkumayirunnullu ... Ella vilavum ariyaamayirunnu ..." Nasrani thaalameki.
"Oho." Harry eenamittu.
"Sagarinu ban kodukkan valiya ishtamaayirunnu ... off topic paranjaal ban, kandaal ban, kettaal ban ... mothathil oru ban-kudukka." Sameer kootticherthu.
"Jyaan avide oru nalla Admin thread kandu. Vannayudane jyaan aa threadil oru post ittu." Harry Nasraniye nokki.
"Kollaam. Aa threadil chaadiyaanu Sagar chathathu." Nasrani paranju.
Scene 5
Neram parapara veluthirikkunnu.
Harry purathekkirangi.
"jyaan onnu offline aavukayaanu ... Ninakku venamengil PM ittu kalikkaam." Sagarinodenna reethiyil Harry paranju.
"Nee ividokke sradhikkanam." Harry Asuvinu nirdesham nalki offlinil poyi.
Harry poya thakkathinu Asu threadsil kayari chaliyadikkaan thudangi.
Pettannaanu pinnil ninnum oru PM notification.
"Venda. Jyaan sarinodu parayum!" Asu oru warning nalki.
Veendum oru PM notification.
"De jyaan reply ayakkuve ...!" Asu Sagarine pedippikkaan sramichu.
Veendum oru PM notification koodi.
"Athu sari. Ennodaano kali." Asu vegam inboxil chennu nokki.
Nokkumbol inbox shoonyam.
Scene 6
"Vegam oru offtopic edukku. Ithiri dridhiyundu." Akki Fan paranju.
"Entha ithra dridhi?" Chayakkadakkaaran chodichu.
"Calicutil oru G2G undu. Avide kappalandi vilkkanam .... roasted."
"Enikkum koodi thanneekku oru offtopic. Kaduppathilaayikkotte." Ramu paranjukondu threadil kayari irunnu.
"Entha Ramu ... Raavilethanne engotta?" Akki Fan chodichu.
"Enikku kurachu poster ottikkanam."
"Thaaningane posterum ottichu nadanno ... Arinjille kaaryangal?" Chayakkadakkaran chodichu. "Nammude blogil oru puthiya user kayariyirikkunnu."
"Aaranayaal?" Ramu udyegathode chodichu.
"Harry ennaanu peru. Innale ividunnaanu poricha infraction kazhichathu."
Scene 7
Rathri ...
Asuvinte urakkeyulla nilavili kettu Harry unarnnu.
"Asu enthenkilum paranjo?" Harry chodichu.
"Ente profilil onnu chennu nokku sare ... Enikku oru infra kittiyirikkunnu ..." Asu karanjukondu paranju.
"Athu verum thonnalaanu. Nee kidannurangu." Harry avane samadhaanippichu.
Asu kidannurangiyappol Harry Sagarinodu paranju: "Sagar, enthinaaningane infra kodukkunathu ...? Enikku deshyam varum ... Thante posts ellam del cheyyum ketto!"
Scene 8
Harry raavile unarnnu nokkumbol Family Discussions threadil kure spamum theri viliyum ...
"Aaraanithu cheythathu?" Harry deshyathodu koodi Asuvinodu chodichu.
"Sagaraayirikkum, sare."
"Sari. Ee vrithikedukalokke jyaan del cheyyaam. Nee poyi ee Likes okke Sameerineyum Nasraaniyeyum elpikkanam. Rep aadhyam kodukkanam."
"Sari sare." Asu samadhanathodukoodi purathekku poyi.
Scene 9
"Ayyo ... Brandhan!!! Brandhan!!!"
Nilavili kettanu Nasrani vaanu nokkiyathu.
Casinova Fan Asuvine muruke pidichirikkunnu.
"Thaan aara? Enthinu vannu?"
"Jyaan oru reppu tharaan Harry paranjittu vannatha sare. Evanodonnu vidaan para."
"Aaradhana pathrame avane vittekku."
Pakshe Casinova Fan avane vittilla.
"Chey!! Ithu valiya salyamayallo. Ivane evide iruthumbol ithra prasnamudakkum ennu karuthiyilla!" Nasrani swayam pirupiruthu. "Sameer, aa food ingedukku!!!"
Oru paathram niraye Pedigreeyumaayi Sameer vannu. Food kandathum Casinova Fan Asuvin melulla pidi vittu. Pinne sradha muzhuvan bakshanathilaayi.
"Paniyonnum edukkukayumilla ... Odukkilathe theettayum!!!" Sameer nirashayodu koodi paranju.
Onnu samadhaanathode niswasichu kondu Asu Rep Sameerinu koduthu.
Sameer Reppinte Comment vaayichu nokki: "Ithu ente oru fan aanu. Avane Casinovaye kaanichu pedippikkaruthu."
Scene 10
Family Discussions thread vrithiyaakkikondirikkumbolaanu Harry aa old post kandathu:
Spam cheyyanamenna aagrahumaayi chennethuiyathu oru pazhaya modinte munpil -- Sagar Alias Jacky.
Agrahamariyichappol dakshina vaykkaan paranju. Uru thendiyude ottakeeshayil enthundu ... ?
Off topic parayunna modsine manasil dhyanichu kondu naalu theri vilichu. Paranju muzhimikkunathinu munpu kitti infraction ...
Pinne postukalil chaliyum theriyumaayi kure kaalam ...
Vyaajanomki zindagi jo kabhi nahi kadham ho jaati hai ....
'Ithaaranu ezhuthiyathu ...? Evideyo kettu maranna oru saili,' Harry chinthichu. 'Sagarinte verpaadinu pinnil enthellaamo rahasyangal olingirippundu.'
Scene 11
Sagarine kurichu kooduthal ariyaan vendi Blogaaya Blogellaam Harry kayariyirangi ...
"Avan nalloru kuttiyaayirunnu." Indhuchoodan paranju.
"Athe. Avan ingine cheyyumennu jyaan theere pratheekshichilla." Munshi Randaaman kootticherthu.
"Ini njyaan aarodu chodikkum Sagarine kurichariyaan?" Harry chodichu.
"Njyaanoru kaaryam paranjaal virodam thonnumo...?" Oru nimishathe idavelakku sesham Indhuchoodan chodichu.
"Illa. Enthaayalum paranjolu." Harry aakamshayode paranju.
"Enikkariyunna oru manthravaadhiyundu ... Thotta padathe vijayippikkunnavanaa ..."
"Athe. Theaterile seat enniyaanu mooper gunakoshtta pattika polum padichathu." Munshi Randaaman kootticherthu.
"Venda. Angane theerunna salyamaanengil pande ozhinju pokumaayirunnu." Harry paranju.
Scene 12
Adutha prabatham ....
"Edei, njyaan Modu sthanathekku matsarikkan povukaya ... thaan enne pinthunakkanam." Harry Asuvinodu paranju.
"Sari."
"Sakthiyaayi pinthunakkanam!"
"Satyamaayum njyaan pinthunakkaam sir." Asu urappu koduthu.
Angine malsarikkanirangiya Harry pettannaanu BAN aayi poyathu.
Athu kandu pedichu Asu Sameerinte aduthekkodi.
Scene 13
"Harry ban aaye!! Harry ban aaye!!" Asu kithachu kondu paranju.
"Enthu patti?" Sameer aakamshayodu koodi chodichu.
"Innu ravile Harry Modu sthanathekku matsarikkan povukayanennu paranju. Pinthunakkaamennu njyaanum paranju. Pakshe pettannu Harry BAN aayi poyi!!"
"Entha sambavam?" Nasrani chodichu.
"Nammude Harry BAN aayi poyennu!" Sameer paranju.
Appolekkum Asuvinu bodham poyi.
"Nee avanu kurachu Rep koduthu nokku." Nasrani paranju.
Rep kittiyappol Asu melle ezhunneettu irunnu.
Scene 14
Pettannu Harry vaathil thalli thurannu kondu akathekku vannathu ...
"Ayyo vyaajan!! Vyaajan!!!" Asu karanju.
Harry chirichu.
Sameerum Nasraniyum Harryeyum Asuvineyum samshayathodu koodi nokki.
"Samsayikkanda ... njyaan Harry thanneyaanu." Harry punchiriyodu koodi paranju. "Pinne, njyaanippo oru Super Modanum koodiyaanu."
"Enna Referrals evide?" Sameer samshayathodu koodi chodhichu.
"Itha kando," Harry Referraline kaanichu kondu paranju.
"Enthu sambavichu?" Sameer chodichu.
"Ee themmaadi," Harry Asuvine nokkikondu paranju, "kaalu vaari. Njyaan BAN aayi. Pinne enikkonnum ormayilla ... Pinne nokkumbol njyaan Super Modan aayirilkkunnu.
"Vaa asu, namukku thirichu pokaam."
"One moment Mr.Harry. I'm CID Asu. Asuyalu!"
"And I'm CID Nasrani. Ithu CID Sameer." Nasrani Sameerinte nere thalla viral choondi kondu paranju.
"ningal enthaaningane braandhu parayunathu?" Harry athbuthathodu koodi chodichu.
"Yes, Mr.Harry ... Sometimes truth is stranger than fiction!" sameer paranju.
"Appo ..." Harry vaakkukal kittaathe valanju.
"You are under arrest!!" Asuyalu paranju.
"Enthinu ...?" Harry pathari.
"Well done, Angels!!!" Aa sabdham kettu avar naalu perum (3 CIDs+Harry) njetti thirinju nokki.
Scene 15
Atha nikkunnu Casinova Fan !!!
"Nee ... ?!" Harry Athbuthathodu koodi chodichu.
"Athe, Njyaan thanne .... CIDD Kandahassan!"
"Ee CIDD ennu vachaal?" Harry samshayathodu koodi chodichu.
"CID Director!" Kandahassan paranju.
"Athinu Director of CID ennalle parayuka ...?"
"Look Mr. Harry, ningal vishayam maattaan nokkanda!" Kandahassan kshobathodu koodi paranju.
"Athinu njyaan oru thettum cheythilla!"
"Kashtam thanne! Ningalil ninnum minimum oru MalayalaManoramaOnline news link enkilum njyaan pratheekshichu." Kandahassan puchathodu koodi paranju.
"Itha ee letter vaayikku. Ennittu parayu." Harry thante kayyil undaayirunna letter Kandahassanu koduthu.
Kandahassan aa letter vaayichu aalochanayil muzhuki.
"Entha kaaryam?" Sameer chodhichu.
Kandahassan letter CIDsinu koduthu.
"Ithu sariyaanengil ...?" Asuyalu ardhokthiyil nirthi.
Scene 16
Narayana Vilasam Chayakkada....
"Avide enthaanu vendathu...?" chaayakkadakkaran chodichu.
"Ithu vayichu nokku ..." Kandahassan katheduthu chaayakkadakkaranu koduthu.
Chaayakkadakkaran kathu vaayichu nokki:
Spam cheyyanamenna aagrahumaayi chennethuiyathu oru pazhaya modinte munpil -- Sagar Alias Jacky.
Agrahamariyichappol dakshina vaykkaan paranju. Uru thendiyude ottakeeshayil enthundu ... ?
Off topic parayunna modsine manasil dhyanichu kondu naalu theri vilichu. Paranju muzhimikkunathinu munpu kitti infraction ...
Pinne postukalil chaliyum theriyumaayi kure kaalam ...
Vyaajanomki zindagi jo kabhi nahi kadham ho jaati hai ....
"Ithu ningalude kayyaksharamalle?" Kandahassan chodichu.
"Athe." Naradhan melle utharameki.
"Satyam parayu, ningalalle Sagarinte maranathinu utharavaadi?" Nasrani chodichu.
"Alla." chaayakkadakkarante Vyaajanaanu utharam paranjathu.
"Pinne aaraanu?" Asuyalu chodichu.
"Varshangalkku munpu Kannan ennu perulla oru moothaashariyaanu FK nirmichathu. Manoharamaaya FK kandu moothaasharikku aa blog swanthamaakkanam ennu poothiyilaki. Appolaanu avide thamasikkaan Sagar vannathu. Kapada sneham abhinachu kondu moothaashari Sagarinte koode ninnu.
Paavam Sagar, moothaashariyude manassu manassilaakkan vaikippoyi. Orikkal Sagar athu kandu - Blog Ozhippikkal Thread !!! Athu kanda Sagarinu dhukkam sahikkanayilla. Adheham aa threadil thanne chaadi chathu." Santi paranju nirthi.
Scene 17
"Harry njyangalodu kshamikkanam," Asuyalu paranju.
"Athe, Njyangal ningale vallaathe thetti dharichu." Sameer kootticherthu.
"Soory Harry, ningal thettukaaranaanennu karuthiyaanu njyangal ee nadakam nadathiyathu." Kandahassan paranju.
"Sorry!" Nasrani paranju.
"Saaramilla. Enthaayaalum ippo karyangal vyakthamaayille?" Harry paranju.
Scene 18: Epilogue
"Subinz, thanavide pokaruthu." Sameer paranju.
"Athentha?" Subinz chodichu.
"Aa blog thaamasikkaan kollilla ... avide Harryundu ...!!!" Nasrani paranju.
~: Subham :~
........
......kidu
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