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    story of 3 friends........

    one plays to win.............

    other plays to defeat........

    and the other....WINS

    DECENT BOYZZ

    chapter 1-page 1

    chapter 2-page 2


    chapter 3-page 7

    chapter 4-page 7

    chapter 5-page 9

    chapter 6-page 11

    chapter 7-page 11

    chapter 8-page 13

    chapter 9-page 15

    chapter 10-page 16

    chapter 11-page 19

    chapter 12-page 23

    chapter 13-page 23

    chapter 14- page 23

    chapter 15-page 25

    chapter 16-page 25

    chapter 17-page 27

    chapter 18-page 32

    chapter 19-page 34

    Thundraja no 1
    chapter 1-page 38
    chapter 2-page 43
    chapter 3-page 43
    chapter 4-page 47



    Chapter 1




    nalla mazha..............................

    thanupulla oru december Rathri...............

    kadaltheerathu koodi oraal nadannu pokunnu..........athu Jai aayirunnu.............avante manasil enthokkeyo minimarayunnu..........ayalude manasil enthokeyo goodarahasyangal olihiripund........pakshe athenthaanennu aarkumariyila.........ayalkku polum.............

    ayal kadal theerathu nilkunnu.........kadalile thiramaalakal ayalude mukhathekku alayadikunnu...........petenu aarokkeyo odi varunnu......Jai odunnu......avane pidikaan gunadakal oadi varunnu...........kadaltheerathe oru mandapathilekku avan oadunnu.........avide vachu gundakale neridunnu......[ACTION]......pakshe gunadakal avaneadichu veezhthi........ennitavane pidichu vaykunnu.............appol oral maadi varunnu.......ayalude mukham kaanikunnila.(camera ayalude kaalukalude idayil)........aal Gun edukkunnu....Jai ayale Roudrabhavaathode nokunnu..........ayal Gun reload cheyunu.......pinne oru vediyocha...................................

    pettennu screen blank........

    VIVEK PRESENTS......


    A DYNAMYTE PRODUCTION.........


    DECENT BOYZZ
    BASED ON A TRUE STORY........
    OPENING TITLES ezhuthikaanikunu..................................
    ..............................
    ......................................
    .............................
    ...................................

    STORY SCREENPLAY,DIALOGUE DIRECTION

    VIVEK






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    Chapter 2

    2 maasangalkku mumpu..........

    oru thanutha veluppaam kaalam......samayam 6 mani.....

    alarm adikunnu.....oral enikunnu....athu Jai aayirunu.....avan pallu thekkunnu,kulikunnu,thorthunnu,enikku Jockey idunnu,enittu uduppum Jeansum idunnu.....slow motionil nadakunnu
    Narrator:"Ithaanu Jai.Jayan ennanu Oiginal peru Style koottan vendi Peru Jai ennakki........aaloru useless-a pakshe kaiyiliriporu size-aa......

    collegeil 3 maasathinidaykku 4 suspension,2 pennu Case.....
    aaloru jagajiliyaannenu naatukaru parayunne...pakshe athinte oru ahankaaravum avanilla keto.........athu ningalkku vazhiye manasilaayikolum...."

    RIP college of Engineering....[effects]

    ellarvarum Physics pareeksha ezhuthunu.avar valare sradhayode ezhuthukaayaanu.....Jai avidilla....pinnavan evideyaanu??????


    Jai Theateril Crook kandondirikunnu............

    Jai"Emraan rockzz.........."

    avan pookal vaariyeriyunnu......avan Dance cheyunnu..theaterilaake clappadi......padam theernu..padam theernu..television pravarthakar vannu Jai-nodu abhiprayam chodikunnu......

    Jai.."Emraan annan kalakki.........emraan roxx"

    (Song:Ethi ethi....)

    college-il pareeksha kazhinju.....ellarude mukathum oru mlaanatha....pettennu Jai Bike-il collegeil ethunnu.....pareeksha hallil ethunnu(slow motion)......

    Jai:"Sir"
    Sir K.K peppar aduki kondirikunnu..........

    K.K"....ahaa...vanna"
    Jai"yes Sir...."

    K.K"entha ithra nerathe"
    Jai"Sir...enikku Q.paper tharuu"
    K.K"chee....chette....ninakku Q.paper venameleda marangoda....YOU GET OUT"

    Jai vishamathode Classinu purathirangi.........pineedu avan thulli chaadunnu..........


    CHAPTER 3

    Jai Bike eduth thendithiriyunnu.......oru Scorpio Car avane follow cheyukayaanu........Caril kure gundakal......

    Gunda no 1:'pidikeda aa chette"
    Gunda no 2:nikkada patti"
    Jai" hentamachiiiii"
    Jai kuthichu paayunnu........
    gundakal gun edukunnu.Bikeinu nere vedi vaykunnu.....(To... To... To..)
    Jai bulletukal dodge cheyunu(Slow motion)
    Jaiyude Bikeinte Tyreil vedi kollunnu...Jai Slow motionil Skid cheythu veezhunnu......

    Jaiyude kai murinju.......

    gundakal vandi Nirthi jaiyine pidikunnu.....eduthittu chaambunnu...

    Gunda No 1 :" nee njangalude frienddinte penngale nokki comment adikum alleda"........ennitoru thallu....

    Gunda no 2:"panna mone,ninte kayyum kaalum thalli odichekaana order.....".....ennittu 2 thallu.........
    Jai thattimaatunnu........

    Jai" adukaruthu...........Hoooo yaa"

    Jai oadunnu..........

    Gunda no 1"pidikada avane"

    pettennu Jai-yine oru bike idichidunnu.....aa bike-il jack aayirunu.....Jack slow motionil bike-il ninnirangunnu....(background music:once upon a time in mumbai"

    Jai" enne rekshikade"
    Jack gundakale neridunnu....[ACTION]
    gundakal oadunnu.....
    Jai" nammala avanmaare thakarthu vittu"

    Jack Jaiyine roudrabahavathode nokunnu

    Jai" enthade?"

    Jack " nee mindaruthu......kanda alavalathikalude kaiyinnu thallu mdichappo samaadaanmaayalo"

    Jai"take it easy,My boy"

    Jack"chee....nirthada....avanteyoru kopp..........iniyenkilum decent aavade.........Kashtam"

    avan bike eduthondu pokunnu....


    Jai ambarakunnu

    Jai"ivaneppo decent aayi???"



    CHAPTER 4

    oolampara aashupathri.......samayam rathri 10 mani.........
    Cell no 53ilekku kaadivellavum biscuitum kondu jolikaran Baiju pokunnu......
    Baiju cell 53il ethunnu..........

    Baiju"Christy!!!"

    baiju cell thurakunnu.........

    Baiju"Christy!!!!!"

    pettennu avante kazhuthi oru pidi.....athu christy aayirunnu.....Baijuvinu swasam muttunnu....avan bodham kettu veezhunnu....Cell slow motionil chavittiturannu Christy rakshapedunnu..........(background music:once upon a time in mumbai)

    Christy oadi rakshapedunnu.............




    adutha divasam raavile 7 mani......

    Jaiyude mobileil oru call.athu Christyudethaayirunnu..........

    Jai"hello..."

    Christy.."Guess who's back?"
    Jaiyude mukham vallathakunnu.....
    Christy"enthaad onnum mindaathe?"
    Jai"you rascal...........nee oolamparennu chaadiya?"
    christy"Now..........you are finished"
    pettennu Jaiyude aduthirunna table lampil oru bullet kollunnu......

    Jai"what???"
    Christy chirikunnu......

    christy"..nee ennikoda.....njan anubhavichathinte 10 iratti nine njan anubahavipikkum........athinu vendi nee kathirikku...hahaha"

    Christy phone cut cheyunnu

    Jai "shit!!"

    CHAPTER 5

    Jaiyum Jackum collaegeil vachu meet cheyunnu......
    Jai"ava collegeil etharuthu........thadayanam.........ennitu theerkanam"
    Jack"che,che,che......anganonnum cheyanda ther's no need for such a move..."
    jai"avane ee parisarathu kettaruthu........avane chavitti purathaakanam"

    Jack"enthayalum ipo avane onnum cheyan paadila.........."

    Jai"pakshe avan collegeil ethan paadila..."

    pettennu oru Bikeinte sound avaide alayadichu..........athu Christy aayirunnu....(BGM:once upon a time in mumbai)

    Jai"daa ethi"

    christyum Gangum collegeil....

    Jai"nee thirichethiyalle?"

    Christy"thirichu varathirikaan pattumoda enikku"
    Jai"ithu ninte avasana varavaayirikkum"

    christy"enkil ninneyum konde njan povuu"
    avar thallan pokunu

    Jack avare pidichu maatunnnu

    Jack"randennavum nirthada.........vannu keriyapozhe thudangiya"

    christy deshaythode pokunnu........
    Jai"Ninte cheetu njan keerumeda christy"


    Jaiyude veedu........rathri 8 mani........

    jaiyude achan Shekharum ammayum avanum koodi food kazhikunnu.....

    Shekahar"exams okke enganundaayirunnu....valathum ezhuthiyaa??"

    Jai"valare easy aayirunu......njan randenanthinu pottum"

    Shekhar" nee padicha ninakku kollam......Physicsum chemistryumokke engaunundaayriunnu??"

    Jai"physics tharkarthitund..........njan aara mon"
    Shekhar"aa aarkariyaam??"

    Jai""

    udane TVyil Crookinte trailer kaanikunu........theaterile janathirakku kanaikkunnu........appo TVyil jai....

    Jai ambarakunnu
    Jai TVyil"Emraan anan kalakki........emraan roxx"

    Shekhar"chii...ithanalleda ninte pareekshayezhuthu.........irangada veetinnu........bloody fool"

    jai-ine veettinnu irakki vidunnu.......

    Jai bikeil oru lakshyavumillathe neengunu.........appol akale oru shabdam...
    oru penkuttiye 3-4 per chernnu nashipikaan nokunnu.........

    Jai aa pradeshathekku bike oatikunnu......

    Jai bike nirthiyittu irangunnu........nadakunnu(slow motion)
    Jai"vidada avale"
    rapist no 1:"poda patti"
    Jaiyude chekittathu adi kittunnu....
    Jai" aaha athrakaaya"
    [ACTION]
    penn oadi rakshapedunnu....Jaiyum rapistsum thallu koodunnu....police ethiyittu avare pokunnu....
    S.I somashekhar"aarada...avide kidannu alambundakunathu...constables aa chettakale pidichu vandil kettu"
    Jai"Sir....njan niraparadiyaanu"
    S.I" aano.....shut up Rascal.....kerada jeepil"
    Jaiyine police stationlkku kondu pokunu........avan lockup maradanathu irayaakunnu.....
    Jai"aayo...amme...ayye..hentammo"






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    Quote Originally Posted by newzealend View Post
    story of 3 friends........

    one plays to win.............

    other plays to defeat........

    and the other....WINS


    Chapter 1

    nalla mazha..............................

    thanupulla oru december Rathri...............

    kadaltheerathu koodi oraal nadannu pokunnu..........athu Jai aayirunnu.............avante manasil enthokkeyo minimarayunnu..........ayalude manasil enthokeyo goodarahasyangal olihiripund........pakshe athenthaanennu aarkumariyila.........ayalkku polum.............

    ayal kadal theerathu nilkunnu.........kadalile thiramaalakal ayalude mukhathekku alayadikunnu...........petenu aarokkeyo odi varunnu......Jai odunnu......avane pidikaan gunadakal oadi varunnu...........kadaltheerathe oru mandapathilekku avan oadunnu.........avide vachu gundakale neridunnu......[ACTION]......pakshe gunadakal avaneadichu veezhthi........ennitavane pidichu vaykunnu.............appol oral maadi varunnu.......ayalude mukham kaanikunnila.(camera ayalude kaalukalude idayil)........aal Gun edukkunnu....Jai ayale Roudrabhavaathode nokunnu..........ayal Gun reload cheyunu.......pinne oru vediyocha...................................

    pettennu screen blank........

    VIVEK PRESENTS......


    A DYNAMYTE PRODUCTION.........


    DECENT BOYZZ
    BASED ON A TRUE STORY........OPENING TITLES ezhuthikaanikunu..................................
    ..............................
    ......................................
    .............................
    ...................................

    STORY SCREENPLAY,DIALOGUE DIRECTION

    VIVEK



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    aabhasatharam ezhuthiyaal ban cheyyum.

    baakki koode poratte
    Mukhya manthri Raaji Vekkuka


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    sangathi kolaam.. pakshe ee camerayude angle okke parayumbol oru samsayam.. ithu eethu reethiyilaaanu parayaan udeshikunanthu.. as a story or screenplay...
    "ഉറക്കമില്ലാത്ത രാത്രികൾ എതിരാളികൾക്ക് സമ്മാനിച്ച് മലയാള സിനിമ എന്ന ഇട്ടാവട്ടത്തു നിന്നും മണിരത്നത്തിന്റെ ഭാഷയിൽ പറഞ്ഞാൽ നാഷണൽ സ്റ്റാർ ആയി പൃഥ്വി വളർന്നു."

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    valare nannayitundu ...ithu adiyam oru novel akki koode ..saahitya academy award okke kitumpo baliya directors ine kondu cheyipikam...
    വിരഹത്തിൻ ചൂടേറ്റു വാടിക്കൊഴിഞ്ഞു നീ
    വിടപറയുന്നോരാ നാളിൽ
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    മംഗളം നേരുന്നു തോഴീ

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    CHAPTER 6

    Jaiyude achan ethi avane jaamyathilarakunnu....
    Jai veettil avasanaayi kidakunu
    Jai"ho..........oduathe idiyayi poyi"
    Jai avante pazhakaalam orkunnu........

    Flashback

    3 bikeukalil avar varunnu.........Collegeile uttakalithozhar.Jack,Jai &Christy
    (Song:koi kahe)
    avar rathri Bike odichu irls hostelil ethunnu....
    Jai"Bike ivide vaykku.........pathukee..Shh"
    Jackum Kristy bike vachittu pathuke varunnu....
    Jai mathilil ninnu oru roominte gnaalayil thattunnu...ennitu pathuke vilikunnu....
    Jai"priya ...priya....."
    No response........
    Jai"priya vathil thurakku........"
    Priya enikunnu........
    Priya"aarade ee rathril?"
    aval janaala thallithurakunnu....
    Janaalayil idichu Jai thaazhe veezhunnu.........
    patti kuraykkunnu....."bow bow bow......"
    Jack "kuzhappamaayi........eda christy ..........Vittoda.........."
    Jackum Christyum bike eduth rakshapedunnu....
    Jai"eda drohiekale..........."
    Security oadi varunnu.........
    Jai"adukaruthu.............njan Karatte black beltaa..........hoooyaaaaa"
    5-6 aalkar oadi varunnu.........
    Jai"ini rakshayilla........."
    Jai oadi rakshapedan sramikunnu.........pakshe Securities avane pidikunnu......avane police stationil aakunnu........avante achan shekhar
    avane jaamyathilirakunnu......
    Shekhar"enthonaada ithu???.........ingane poyal ente veedu police stationilekku maattendi varumalo"
    Jai"Hmm........."
    skehar"neeyum ninte kure alavalaathi friendsum..... avanaamaara ninne kondu nadannu vashalaakunne"
    Jai"atheyathe......."




    CHAPTER 7


    Narrator"anganaayirunu avar...........collegeile tharaangalaayirunnu avar.............inapiriyaatha suhurthukkal.avarude aathmabhandham oru divasam thakarunnu...............

    athinu mumpu oru paranyakadha.......... christyum Jyothiyudeyum.....yaadrsishchikamaayi kandumuttiya avar yadrischikamaayi paranayathil veezhukayayirunu...........pakshe ee bandham ihtamilaatha oraalundaayirunnu........JAI...kaaranam Jaiyinu avale ishtaaayirunnu.....avalude manasu maattan Jai sramichirunnu pakshe sramangal viphalamaayi ..........angane aa divasam..........."

    annu chemistry Lab aayirunnu......break aayappol ellarum purathirangi.....pakshe Jai maathram poyila....

    Jai"Jyothi nilkku"
    Jyo"entha???"
    Jai"enikkoru kaaryam paranundu.........I love you"
    Jyo" Shut up Jai......you are not going to start this again"

    Jai"no Jyothi.........I am serious........aa marangodane vittittu ete koode vaa"
    Jyothi mindaathe nadannu pokunnu.....Jai avale kadannu pidikunnu........avale nashipikaan nokkunnu......
    Jai"ithinoru theermaanumundaakathe ninne njan vidila"
    Jyo"leave me you stupid"

    Oral Labilekku nadannu varunnu.......athu Christy aayirunnu.....
    Christy"Vidada avale.........."
    christy oadi vannu Jaiye chavuttunnu........
    Christy"koode ninu chathikukayayirunaleda naari"
    Jai Sulphuric acidinte bottle edukunnu.....ennittu christye chavittunnu......Christy thaazhe veenu.....

    Jai"Ivale kittan nineyennalla ninte achane vare njan thattum"
    christy"You!!!"
    Jyothi Jaiyine pidichu maatunnu........
    Jyo"stop"
    Jai avale thattimaatunnu.....
    Christy"ninne njan........"
    Christy Jaiyine idikunnu....Jai Sulphuric acidinte bottle pottikunu...Christy athu chavittitheripikunnu........avan Jaiyine chavitti veezhuthunnu........enittu slide cheythu poyi aa pottiya kuppi edukunnu.........

    Christy pottiya kuppiyeduthu Jaiyine kuthan varunnu........pakshe Jyothi munnil chaadunnu........avlkku kuthukollunnu.........aval veezhunnu....(slow motion)
    Jai ambarakunnu........avan oadi rakshapedunnu.....(ultra slow motion)
    Christy"Nooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!"(slow motion)

    Narrator"angane Christyude thallayil kolakuttam ketti vachu Jai rekhapettu........manasika rogiyenna parigananamoolam avane oolam parayilaakki"

    CHAPTER 8

    Jai Bedil kidannu pazhaya kaaryangal aalochichu theernu.avan enikunnu........
    Jack Jai-ye kaann veettil varunnu....
    Jack" Are you alright?"
    Jai"Ya..........njan nammude pazhaya kaaryangal orkuvayirunu..."
    Jack"It was a good time.........isnt it?"
    Jai"athe........njanum neeyum Christyum"
    Jack"neeyanu ellathinum kaaranam........ne avante jeevitham nashipichu"
    Jai"njan eniku thonunathu cheyum........ninakku prathyekichu nashtamonnumillalo"
    Jai"illa........pakshe nashtam muzhuvan ninakaanu varan pokunathu......Ortho...........njan ponnu.naale kaanam"
    Jai"Bye"

    Jack Bike eduth pokunu.....
    Irutninte maravil kure bikeukal avane follow cheyunnu..........Bikeukalude kalakalanaadam avide maatoli kondu......
    Nalla mazha peyukayaanu........

    pettennu oru bikeil oru gunda ethi Jackine chavittunnu........avan Bikeil ninnu veezhunnu.....Jack roll cheythu avane chavittunnu......avan Gundakale neridunnu...[ACTION]
    avan gundakale idichu veezhthunu........oru gunda oadi reksahpedunnu..........avan aa gundaye pidikaan vendi oadunnu.....
    Gunda oru idavzhiyilekku oadunnu....avaide vachu Jack Gundaye pidikunnu
    Jack" enthaada ninaglude udheshyam......parayada"
    pettenu Backil ninnu Jackinte thalayil aaro gun aim cheythirikunnu......
    Athu Christy aayirunnu....avan oru black coling glass vachirikunnu......(effects)(slow motion)(BGM-uooo.........yaa)
    Christy chirikunnu........

    Pettennu screen blank...........................

    adutha divasam.........samayam raavile 9 mani...
    Jai collegeil ethunnu.pakshe Jackine kandila........
    avan ambarakunnu......

    Jai"Hmm........avananenthu pati?"
    Jai Jackine anweshichu pala sthalangalilum pokunnu.........CD kada,Bar,Park,Lodge,A padam oadunna theatreukal..........

    pakshe avane kaanmaanila.........
    Last edited by Daniel John; 10-08-2010 at 10:29 PM.
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    Quote Originally Posted by National Star View Post
    sangathi kolaam.. pakshe ee camerayude angle okke parayumbol oru samsayam.. ithu eethu reethiyilaaanu parayaan udeshikunanthu.. as a story or screenplay...
    screenplay......
    Last edited by Daniel John; 05-06-2012 at 11:40 PM.
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