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  1. 01-05-2013, 05:27 PM #1
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    Default **കവിത -നിശ്ചലം.**


    നിശ്ചലം........

    പാതി മുറിച്ച നാളികേരം
    അതില്* എന്നാ നനവുള്ള
    തിരിനാളങ്ങള്* .
    തൊട്ടടുത് നിലവിളക്കും,
    ചന്ദനത്തിരിയും.
    പരസ്പരം ധൂമം
    സൃഷ്ട്ടിച്ച അവര്*ക്കരികില്*
    ഒരാള്* കിടക്കുന്നു.
    കണ്ണടച്ച് വലിയൊരു
    ഉറക്കത്തിലേക്കു
    അഴ്ന്നതു പോലെ..
    ഞാനൊന്നു നോക്കി
    രോദനം കൊള്ളുന്ന
    എല്ലാവരിലും ഉറ്റവരുടെ
    രൂപം, മുഖം...
    പിന്നെ എങ്ങോ
    അകലനൊരുങ്ങി നിന്ന
    ജഡത്തിനെയും....
    അയ്യോ...എന്*റെ
    മുഖം...
    Last edited by Vineeth vasudevan; 01-05-2013 at 05:38 PM.
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  3. 02-26-2013, 04:29 PM #2
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    kollam...
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  4. 02-26-2013, 04:31 PM #3
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    Good, Keep it UP
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  5. 03-12-2013, 11:31 AM #4
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    very nice... !!!
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    good...
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  7. 03-17-2013, 11:56 AM #6
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    Adipoly da
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  8. 03-17-2013, 07:29 PM #7
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    climax porichutto...
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  9. 03-17-2013, 08:14 PM #8
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    Appa prethamaarunna ..........
    When truth is a fantasy, reality lies ..
    Na    rayana ..    . Narayana ...
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  10. 03-17-2013, 08:42 PM #9
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    nice...........
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  11. 03-17-2013, 09:28 PM #10
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    super bhai.....................

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